Elizabeth+H.

March 26, 2012
 * Blog 8:**

I didn't have very many areas of strength in this research paper because I didn't try hard enough. My topic sentences indicate the paragraphs focus pretty well. My conclusion wasn't bad but it could of been better. My weaknesses were the obvious. I didn't have a full four pages and I didn't use citations. My introduction was weak and it had no thesis statement. My expression of content was bad. The information in the paper was not expressed or presented effectively and ethically because I had no citations.

** The Legend of Sleepy Hollow **
 * Jan. 27, 2012.**

I'm reading The Legend of Sleepy Hollow by: Washington Irving. I'm excited to read about the story of [|Ichabod Crane] and his attempt to win the heart and hand of [|Katrina Van Tassel] with a ghost story twist. Stories with love and also supernatural happenings intrigue me to see how they turn out in the end.